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By the sea

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Image size
4000x3000px 2.07 MB
Make
EASTMAN KODAK COMPANY
Model
KODAK EASYSHARE M530 Digital Camera
Shutter Speed
1/256 second
Aperture
F/8.0
Focal Length
7 mm
ISO Speed
80
Date Taken
Mar 20, 2011, 2:01:30 PM
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

It's my fist time writing a critique and I'm not a professional. I just hope it's fair.


  • I didn't give full mark for Vision because this line of wood is really bugging me. Proportionally speaking, I think it's too high. In my opinion it would have been better at one third of the photo.


  • For Originality, I've already seen quite a few of this type of shots but they all were in Black and White. It's my first time seeing one in colours.


  • Full marks on Technique because I always love it when one can see what lays underneath the water. And the sand's rippling effect is stunning. And the clouds ! The clouds' reflection are just Perfect !


  • Not full mark for Impact because scrolling down the browser, I not so sure I would have stopped by. But I can't deny either that the whole picture and the spotless water really make me feel calm and at peace...



I hope that was useful to you and keep up the good work !